They choose weak, weak evidence, and they open by putting out the official story. A trailer is no place to present the official story. Everyone knows that. You need hard, incontrovertible evidence, not games.

The Silverstein quote is not evidence of demolition, and should have been cut two versions ago. This is just amateur stuff.

http://911blogger.com/node/5944

If you don't know how the Silverstein "pull it" claim can be challenged in 6 different ways, you're just not paying attention, or you don't want to know.

Then it uses Alex Jones yelling like a madman on the street to make the case? It's not going to convince anyone that we're credible. Every image needs careful consideration.

The Charlie Sheen quote "75% of their targets" is not stong evidence of anything.

Steven Jones has a botched quote, "literally hanging by a thread." No. That's figuratively. Why include a grammar error like that from a physicist who has a lot better things to say?

Jones talks about "thermite cutter charges" over the sequence where squibs are seen exploding, seeming to suggest that thermite explodes, which isn't the case. This is another technical error.

The squib scene should be shown longer and in more detail, with appropriate commentary. Even the LC2 commentary for the squibs was better than having people have to think about what the hell "thermite" is, and then come up with the wrong idea from the visuals.

Even Clinton gets to try and exonerate himself, allegedly "trying." The evidence suggests that Clinton did not allow them to go after Al Qaeda at all, and that they actually bombed the Sudan with cruise missiles when Sudan tried to make a case for extraditing Al Qaeda people to the US. The Clinton regime also refused a thick intelligence file from Sudan intelligence, and the Clinton regime cooperated with Al Qaeda and the Kosovo Liberation Army (Al Qaeda linked drug smugglers) in the Balkans.

Rosie O'Donnel also has a completely inaccurate quote. "First time in history that fire has ever melted steel." This is complete gibberish. Fire is how steel is melted in blast furnaces. Out of control fire has weakened steel to the point of it becoming a tangled web of spaghetti. The quotes need to be clear, unassailable and incriminating. Not more fodder for debunkers to go apeshit over.

Here is a script I wrote for Tim Sparke after the last "teaser." He said he would pass it on to Dylan Avery.

TRAILER CONCEPT 1:

SEC. TRANS. NORMAN MINETA: When the plane was coming into the Pentagon ... the young man also said to the Vice President, 'Do the orders still stand?'

ALEX JONES: Inside job.

CHARLIE SHEEN: Debate me on the evidence.

MUSIC

Quick cuts:

World Trade Center impact,

ON BLACK MATTE: 'LOOSE'

Bush sitting in classroom

'CHANGE'

WTC7 collapse

'FINAL'

Tower collapse/exploding

'CUT'

Tower collapse sequence highlighting squibs

Witnesses: "Explosion," "Bomb", "Explosions," etc.

Clip from HBO, firemen on telephone hear detonation charge go off LOUD.

Bush at UN: Let us never tolerate outrageous conspiracy theories concerning the attacks of September 11th.

LOOSE CHANGE FINAL CUT
ONLY IN THEATERS
SEPTEMBER 9TH 2007
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I think this can be played with for a longer and shorter version

Other media people should contact them and offer suggestions to improve these trailers before they go out to the public.

70 Disturbing Facts About 9/11

John Doraemi publishes Crimes of the State Blog
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